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saijal sharma
3/7/2016 02:12:02 pm
. Code breakers need to be smart to defend their nation. In achieve 3000, the code breakers it discusses that the code breakers were prohibited from discussing their secret messages about the Turing Bombe. The brave code breakers were not allowed to share their secret messages and they were smart enough to solve their nations problems.
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Bella
3/7/2016 02:35:06 pm
.Code breakers are very helpful and needed to be very skilled in order to act. In the article, "The Code Breakers", it talks about the code breakers were prohibited from discussing their secret message. An expert code breaker must be loyal, and be great in math and puzzles.
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Menahil Khan (pd.8)
3/7/2016 02:39:57 pm
.........Code breakers need to be highly trained in order to work for their nation. In the article "Code Breakers" it talks about the turning bombe which was created to crack Germany's codes with the help of the code breakers. In order to become an expert code breaker you have to be smart in doing math and puzzles, be able to know how use the bombe machine properly and have be helpful to people.
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Ryan Shah
3/7/2016 03:53:55 pm
......The code breakers had many reasons to break the German code during the war. It states that Code breakers are what saved the day. They were smart, loyal, and they could keep a secret. Code breakers are what saved the day because their were smart, loyal and could keep a secret. To break the German codes during the war.
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Ryan Shah
4/3/2016 08:15:10 am
......The code breakers had many reasons to break the German code during the war. It states that "Code breakers" are what saved the day. They were smart, loyal, and they could keep a secret. Code breakers are what saved the day because their were smart, loyal and could keep a secret. To break the German codes during the war.
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Khoodoyor Urokov
3/7/2016 04:09:37 pm
.......Code breakers have to go through hard times however, they are one of the most important people in their country. All the code breakers made a machine that break codes and they used machine to broke German codes. Code breakers can't discuss about their secret work and they should be mathematics. All the code breakers were chess masters.
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Esther Matayeva pd4
3/7/2016 04:13:18 pm
There are many good and bad characteristics about the code breakers. In this article it talks about the code breakers and because of this there are many wars due to the code breakers. Some of the characteristics of the breakers is that they are smart, experienced, and problem solvers, however the bad characteristics of a code breaker is that they were scared but never gave up.
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Muhammad Khalikov Pd.8
3/7/2016 04:26:08 pm
..... Code breakers were really strategic and skillful and they helped the society and become more safer. In " Achieve 3000's" it shows that code breakers have worked hard in Bletchley Park to save their nation and win the World War II. A professional code breaker must be responsible, heroes, and be really nationalist.
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Juan Jervis
3/7/2016 04:33:02 pm
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JJ
3/7/2016 04:36:41 pm
i indent only in the intro with a dot
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Qirong Peng
3/7/2016 04:38:51 pm
…………It’s hard to be a good code breaker, there are many rules and characteristics you need to follow and have. In achieve 3000’s “The code breakers” the main idea is the code breakers use the machines named “Turning bombed” and they broke the secret messages from German. A good code breaker must work very hard, speak carefully and have a good logic to solve difficult puzzles and math problems.
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erena per 8
3/7/2016 06:10:05 pm
........ German had codes and the England code breakers broke it. The “code breakers”, it discuss about England break the codes Germany tried to keep secret in World War 2. The code breaks during World War 2. The break needs to be smart, secreted and sneaky to not be trade anybody.
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Anabel Espinal Pd.8
3/7/2016 06:18:54 pm
.....What are some characterics for a good Code Breaker? There are many characteristics that make a good Code Breaker. In "The Code Breakers" It talks about how smart they are to invent machines, that help them to broke German Code, and how intelligent they are keeping their secrets. A good code breaker must be quiet, Good in math, But also there are difficult things to be a Code Breaker.
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Ever Salazar Pd.
3/7/2016 06:40:55 pm
......................To be a good code breaker it requires certain characteristic. To start I will define what a code breaker is. A code breaker is a person that is able to manipulate technology well and are able to hack pass codes to see important.
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Adrian Rodriguez
3/7/2016 06:48:31 pm
Code-breakers are hard working people. In the article the "code-breaker " it says that they helped break Germany codes. Some characteristics of a code breaker is that they break cods and help lots of people by breaking cods.
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Adrian Rodriguez
3/7/2016 06:50:15 pm
......Code-breakers are hard working people. In the article the "code-breaker " it says that they helped break Germanys code. Some characteristics of a code breaker is that they break cods and help lots of people by breaking cods.
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Gillian Tipismana
3/7/2016 07:07:51 pm
........Code Breaker was those people who saved many lives, even though they were aware of death, they continued helping people. That's why they were important in battle, smart and brave.
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Napier R
3/7/2016 08:32:38 pm
.... Code breaker are aware that they need to keep secrets to save a lot of innocent live and win the war. The code breakers couldn't say nothing to anyone about what they were going to not make people freak out or flee the country. These code breaker put their life to save there country and there people it was a dangerous risk they had it to take in order to help their country.
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Frank Chen
3/7/2016 09:35:06 pm
. Code breakers are great people, they helped their country. In Achieve 3000's "The Code Breakers:, it states the Turing Bomb help code breaker a lot to code break top secret messages. Which means that to be a code breaker, it will be very dangerous and very difficult.
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yingxing
3/8/2016 03:44:13 pm
-----Many of the code participate to crack Germany code during wartime. These code breaker require many specialty.In the article "the code breaker " it talk about number of the life code breaker saved , danger of selecting unsmart decide and being target by Germany,but they still help to achieved even if it is very hard and danger.These code breaker has many characterist that include unsafe ,hero ,anonynity ,smart and famous.
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3/8/2016 04:23:22 pm
the Code breakers are brave, intelligent and hardworking because they work day and night, they never give up and very intelligent. In ''the code breakers'' it talks about how the code breakers were careful for not being found. The characteristics of a good code breaker is smart, careful and brave. A code breaker needs to be intelligent. Because if you want to be code breaker you have to study hard and focus on using skills to crack code . For instance, in the text it states ''the best brains in Britain worked to crack Germanys commucation''. The code breaker are intelligent. Intelligence is a important characteristic in order to be a code breaker. The author says they're the best brains in Britain. You have to be intelligent in this situation because you're a code breaker you need to be smart to break codes. A code breaker needs to be careful. Because in order to be a code breaker you cant make any mistakes. So they wouldn't get targeted by bombs. For example in the paragraph the author says '' the code breakers were that if word of their location leaked, they would be targeted by bombs''. Code breakers are careful. They spent day and night without being captured and not get targeted by bombs. It was a difficult skill to be careful. You need to be careful in those kind of situations because being a code breaker also means to not get attention. A code breaker has to be brave. If you want to be a code breaker and don't have bravery. Then there's no point becoming a code breaker. If word of their location was leaked they would be targeted by unrelenting waves of german bombers. They would risk their lives being by being attacked by bombs. But, also they are helping their country by ending the war. It makes them feel proud.
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3/9/2016 03:08:16 pm
The code breakers are brave, intelligent and hardworking because they work day and night, they never give up and very intelligent. Intelligence, hardworking and bravery are very important characteristics to become a code breaker. Because if you don't have these characteristics find some other job. Being a code breaker you also have to have loyalty and without loyalty you're not a code breaker and never will be. The characteristics of a good code breaker is smart, careful and never give up. These characteristics are very important to have to be a code breaker. If you don't have these characteristics then you are dead for life.
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Sumya Munni
3/8/2016 06:29:56 pm
..... The code breakers have a secret work for many reason. In the article " The Code Breaker " it talk about in world war 2 Britain use the Turing bombs to crack Germans code and hid in Bletchley park. This shows the code breakers are smart, brave and careful with their work in several way.
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Nozanin Ahmadova
3/8/2016 07:56:44 pm
..... The code breakers job is very hariable.In Achieve 3000's "The code breakers" it discusses about the German's had a lot of secrets that British code breakers learned to understand.
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Kripa Baniya
3/9/2016 04:36:54 am
. . Code Breakers work very hard to decode other countries code. In the article "The code breakers" it discusses how code breakers sucessfully decoded the secret codes of another nation." A good code breaker should be smart to solve math, keep secret about their country and be able to decode other nation's code.
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Error
3/9/2016 04:47:03 pm
. During the World war 2, smartest people in Britain worked to crack Germany’s secret messages. In the article “The code breakers” the author states that Britain’s code breakers created a machine that was able to break Germany’s code without letting them realize. During that time, the good code breakers were really smart, talented, and sneaky, so they don’t get caught by Germany.
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Nazar Sheverak
3/9/2016 04:47:34 pm
During the World war 2, smartest people in Britain worked to crack Germany’s secret messages. In the article “The code breakers” the author states that Britain’s code breakers created a machine that was able to break Germany’s code without letting them realize. During that time, the good code breakers were really smart, talented, and sneaky, so they don’t get caught by Germany.
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Julia Sarjevskaia (period 7)
3/9/2016 09:48:38 pm
.........The code breakers had to have some special characteristics and skills in order to do their job. In “The Code Breakers” it states that the code breakers destroyed the secret German messages using the Tutoring Bombe in complete anonymity. A good code breaker had to be patient, unnoticeable, as well as a real hero.
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Madina pd8
3/11/2016 07:34:12 pm
.........The code breakers tried to break the code to win a war. They were afraid that someone could know about their secret. They used to work on that whole day and night to break this code.
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cristian
3/12/2016 09:54:43 am
......Code Breakers have good characteristics and skills that help them win.In "Code Breakers" they discuss how they use there characteristics to defeat Hitler.Some good characteristics of a Code Breaker are alert, hero, and help people their country.
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Timur Uzbekov
3/13/2016 09:11:35 am
.,.,.,.Code breakers were a great power during WW2. In “The Code breakers” author discusses about how those people were working on German codes made by machine called Enigma. During WW2 code breakers were quite, very good in codes and computer math, and they were not afraid of taking a pivot role in war.
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OMAR ABDELBARY (PERIOD 8)
3/13/2016 08:28:46 pm
______Being proficient as a code breaker is essential to serve a nation. Most skilled individuals must be chosen to work as code breakers because it is serious and challenging job especially during a war. Code breakers must be anonymous, intelligent, and math experts.
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Milana Burnaeva.
3/14/2016 03:57:13 pm
.....The code breakers made a serious good job during World War II and they helped to change our history. In the article "Code Breakers" it shows that during the war there were people who created some machines that broke German codes and they changed people lives. The code breakers were good workers who tried to help people in the war by breaking German codes and stopped the World War II.
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Nicole Kwok
3/14/2016 04:03:28 pm
. The code breakers were essential for ending the ward and saving the life by breaking German codes. To accomplish their mission they made a succesful machine called Turing Bombe. It helps to crack the code from Germany.On the other hand, they also fear of death and they have to be vigilant every moment to prevent death. In conclusion, even German never realized Britain had broken their code. This shown how professional they are, and how they were important to the war. Being a good code breaker have to contain many skills, knowledge, and be loyal to their country.
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THANCHANOK NUAYDECHA
3/15/2016 06:33:19 pm
_The skillful code breaker led Britain to victory in world war two. In “The Code Breaker" it's all about how code breaker work for help British military defeat Germany. From making their work successfully, a good code breaker must be helpful, careful and can keep a secret.
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Johnny Baez
3/21/2016 07:23:11 pm
. Code breakers are a secret group in society, and also they have secret codes in their group. They have to be a little bitter smarter and a little bit more unnoticeable because in the article Achieve 3000, the code breakers was supposedly prohibited to use any of techniques of communication or secret language. The code breakers were smart enough to solve their issue with their nations about the Turning bombs.
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